As far as the essay is concerned I think that I am well prepared. My powerpoint, the starting line for the essay needs a little work, but I am confident that my information will be helpful in the group project and the essay. The research has been done, now all I need to do is organize the information.
In regards to what needs more work on the essay, my theory and explanations could use some attention. My theory seems clear to me, but from the comments I have received, it is still a little vague and could use some detail. The same goes for my examples. The examples could use a little more information regarding how they relate to my topic, and how they affect my theory. It is easy to say that literature is changing, it is much harder to explain what aspects of the internet are creating those changes. With a little more attention paid to the details I think that I can come out with a very good project.
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