Jenna, I really liked how you have outlined each section of your research paper. I think all you need to do now is start writing the paper in the order you have outlined.
You have a very nice outline to work with here. I also like the beginning of the draft that you have written up. It looks like you'll have a nice paper once you've gotten started.
I really like the topic for your essay. I'm intrigued to see how your essay comes together. I really like that you are intending to explain a great deal about the sources that you are using by explaining different styles of modern works online. I can't wait to read more! :)
Jenna,
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you have outlined each section of your research paper. I think all you need to do now is start writing the paper in the order you have outlined.
You have a very nice outline to work with here. I also like the beginning of the draft that you have written up. It looks like you'll have a nice paper once you've gotten started.
ReplyDeleteI really like the topic for your essay. I'm intrigued to see how your essay comes together. I really like that you are intending to explain a great deal about the sources that you are using by explaining different styles of modern works online. I can't wait to read more! :)
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