The topic of your presentation is very clear, but I'm having a hard time discovering your theory. While you have created a very useful guide to your topic, I would suggest adding some of your own theories and assertions. Likewise, you might want to consider incorporating some of the class readings and discussions into your presentation. Overall, however, you have created a very clear guide to your project that is visually effective. Some images could be used in a more central manner, and some slides could be edited to ensure optimal reading conditions. This is a very good start to your presentation.
The topic of your presentation is very clear, but I'm having a hard time discovering your theory. While you have created a very useful guide to your topic, I would suggest adding some of your own theories and assertions. Likewise, you might want to consider incorporating some of the class readings and discussions into your presentation. Overall, however, you have created a very clear guide to your project that is visually effective. Some images could be used in a more central manner, and some slides could be edited to ensure optimal reading conditions. This is a very good start to your presentation.
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